Good job! The first 2 lines of your poem is really 4 lines which makes the last two lines 1 line. I feel that it a good poem, but make sure that you think about spacing. When you say something then come to a stop, you should put the next thought on the following line. Good job otherwise!
Good job! The first 2 lines of your poem is really 4 lines which makes the last two lines 1 line. I feel that it a good poem, but make sure that you think about spacing. When you say something then come to a stop, you should put the next thought on the following line. Good job otherwise!
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